courses, videos, and books to teach
this valuable skill. A typical checklist
appeared in an article by Pincus4:
˲ Know your purpose
˲ Know your target
˲ Focus on your customer
˲ Be authentic
˲ Be specific
˲ Be prepared
˲ Be concise
˲ Solve a problem
˲ Show your passion
˲ Practice
There is even a Web site that offers
10,000 examples of elevator pitches in
case you have a mental block (http://
www.speech-topics-help.com). The
quintessential pitches stick in listen-
ers’ minds.
2 Public speaking organi-
zations such as Toastmasters have
offered practice sessions for elevator
pitches for many years.
Do elevator Pitches Really
Make A Difference?
The advice to prepare an elevator
pitch is commonly presumed to be
valuable for many professionals, including project managers, sales engineers, visionaries, and policy makers.
Entrepreneurs preparing to pitch to
venture capitalists are often sternly
warned to have a great pitch because,
it is said, the VCs judge the quality of
the idea and the team by the quality of
the pitch.
With all this enthusiasm, you might
be surprised to learn that most elevator pitches do not lead to the final outcomes sought by their speakers. For
example, innovators use pitches but
suffer a failure rate of about 96%.
1 It is
like the lottery—your pitch is almost
certain to be a losing ticket, but you
buy it because it is cheap and there is a
A successful
pitch induces
the listener to make
a decision sought
by the speaker.
The elevator pitch
has been enshrined
in mythology that
greatly inflates its
importance and
promises an outcome
it cannot deliver.
chance that your 30-second pitch could
change everything.
While there have been no rigorous studies of pitch outcomes, there
have been several studies about the
influence of business plans, on which
many pitches are based. If the business plan makes a big difference to
investor decisions, then there is a
reasonable chance that its synopsis
(the elevator pitch) might have a big
impact too.
However, until recently most of
the studies of business plans were
plagued with issues such as small and
unrepresentative samples and weak
statistical methodologies, which led
to unreliable and contradictory claims
about whether business plans affect
investor choices.
Finally, in 2009, two Stanford-trained economic historians published
a definitive study that looked carefully
at the whether business plans actually
convey any information to VCs.
3 This
study was a breakthrough because it
used a much larger sample (762 plans)
than used in previous studies, the
plans were representative of those typically screened by VCs, and the study
used rigorous statistical methods to
achieve its results.
The authors unequivocally ruled
out the idea that business plans com-
municate anything to VCs: “We find
that neither the presence of business
planning documents nor their con-
tent serve a communicative role for
venture capitalists…[O]ur findings
are consistent with the view held by
VC practitioners who dismiss efforts
to systematically evaluate the role of
business planning documents.”
In other words, VC investors do
not—perhaps cannot—infer much
about likely success from business
plans, let alone their elevator cousins.
The Bigger Picture
In escaping a myth, we want to preserve its nugget of truth while defining
new and more effective actions. To do
this, we must step back and look at the
bigger picture.
The desired outcome of a project is
to produce a result—for example, a system or product—that brings value to
a group of customers; they adopt it as
part of their practice.
The innovation process producing
this outcome has many pieces. One
summary of the pieces is the Eight
Practices framework.
1 The first five
practices—sensing, envisioning, offering, adopting, and sustaining—are the
main elements of the process. The last
three—executing, leading, embodying—create an environment of success
for the first five.
At first glance, it appears that the elevator pitch is a component of the envisioning practice. The purpose of that
practice is to tell a compelling story (a
“vision”) of how the world would be if
the innovation idea were incorporated
into it. The story makes it obvious what
problem is solved and why the innovation proposal is likely to solve it. The
elevator pitch might appear to be a
précis of this story. And another business construct, the motto, may seem
like a précis of the elevator pitch. Thus
we have a hierarchy: envisioning story;
elevator pitch; and motto.
Here are two examples:
˲ The John Deere Company has a vision about farm machines improving
productivity by factors of 10 or more. In
their pitch, they envision a line of tractors and tools that perform impeccably
and never wear out, so that farmers get
the most out of their investment. They
ask their investors to join them in making this happen. They summarize their
vision with the motto, “Nothing runs
like a Deere.”
˲ NASA has a vision of a space elevator structure that can lift payloads